[syo]

Hmm.. nie wiem zbytnio jak nazwac to.. "dzielo", no ale... Postanowilem napisac przygode na bazie gry Icy Tower Poki co stworzylem dwa rozdzialki. Maly szkopul - pisze... w jezyku angielskim. Bledow zapewne co nie miara, ale w tresc podobno latwo sie wczuc i latwo to sobie wszystko wyobrazic. Harry Potter to nie jest (i nie bedzie!), ale nie o to w tym chodzi. Zapraszam do lektury, jak narazie, pierwszych dwoch czesci przygody:

CHAPTER I - The Crew

- These 7 men will form a team which will penetrate the insides of this mysterious Tower, they will seek the secrets that this .. "building" containts. These 7 men will risk their lifes just to get in and out of the Tower safely, and bring some proof or information. These 7 men...
- Hold on, hold on. - the proffessor is stopped by Syo. - How come you say "seven" when there is only six of us? Some kind of big surprise is being prepared?
- I thought you'd say that.
The door opens as a shadowed person walks into the room.
- Heh. - said Syo. - I must be a visionary to know who will come out just when this door opened. Hey, Beak, nice to see ya.
The person that walked through the door was John Beak, the 7th member of the Tower team. Six other members are split into two teams - the C-Team which specifies for combination jumping, and the F-team, specified for high and very high jumps. These two teams will fill each other when inside the Tower.
- Alright, it's cool, but hold on - how come Beak is a lonewolf? He's got three hands or something? Radioactive? - asked Syo.
- Syo, shut up. Is this really important? Gosh, and you'll be my leader through this whole mission... - a reply was heard from a person standing in the corner of the lab. It was Myrddin, John Beak's friend. He's a mysterious guy, he doesn't speak much, likes to put out the people's fire, just like he did a couple of seconds ago to Syo.
- Geez, Myrd.. Can't you feel any jokes? - said Syo. All of the members were talking just like they knew each other for some time now.
- Alright... Well, since Beak is a no-team, then who will be with
Myrd and me? - asked Syo
- Fear not, I have a perfect candidate for the F-team. I'm sure, that he will be a help for you guys. That's the person far to the right. Look.
- Uuh.. Does he have an earring? What the hell?
- Don't look at the earring, look at the whole person. Heh, I forgot that you can't see what I see. NeN, because that's his name, is a perfect member for the F-team. He knows various F-tricks: he has the ability to make high jumps one after another!
- A Radical Rejumper.. - said Myrddin. - I've heard something about this ability, sometimes it's useful, but not all along..
- Another technique that NeN knows better than you both is a technique called "Ultimate Noob". The purpose of this technique is to do short jumps to gain speed and jump quicker.
- Hah! The whole F-team are Ultimate Noobs, they don't know how to make combination jumps! - a funny-dressed person shouted from the other side of the room.
- Tajek, be quiet! You don't do well yourself! I hope that this long pause of yours won't affect your skills! - replied the proffessor.
- Yeah, yeah.. Hey, remebmer that I was almost the best one last year! ME!
The 5 of 7 members were talking with the proffessor for some time. They got information about the structure of the Tower, the lenght (well, they didn't get anything there, because even the proffessor doesn't know how high this Tower is), the floors.. Time was ticking away and there wasn't much left before the start of the mission.
- Well, where are the other 2 members? I wonder which ones have been chosen? - the proffessor seemed to be asking himself.
- I know who has been chosen - replied NeN - Do you imagine this mission without the C-team veteran? The legend?
- Ah, yes - John Beak seems to know about whom NeN was talking about - Mizi Mace...
Just as JB said this name, the door opened and two men entered the room.
- Hey guys, nice to be here again. - Mizi Mace got smiled. - Looks like that I'll lead the C-team again. This time we'll get higher than F100. No excuses.
- Hey, Mace.. Is this your son? Gwhahahah! - laughed Syo, asking for the person next to Mizi.
- Syo, stupid as always.. Nope, that's not his son, dumbass! - said Myrddin
- Yeah, Myrddin is right. Well, that is my student, Strack. Believe me, he HAS skills, and he will show them. He's even better than me. Oh, and Syo, at least I can have a son, hehe.
The atmosphere was good, the preparations have started.

CHAPTER II - Entering

- You will be all equipped with a microphone, so you can communicate with each other when the difference between your height is so high that you can't see each other. Also, you'll have to put a termo-scafander, it's getting colder when higher inside the Tower. You can put your clothes on it. Oh, and these pills should protect you from the hunger. One pill should last for at least one day. Each one of you will have 3 of them. These are the things that I can give. Now, take your backpacks and take the most important things from your bags - the professor was walking with the teams, explaining their equipment.
- Most important things? - asks Syo - So like what should I take? Pants? A toothbrush? Oh, I know, I know! A toaster? No, no, no! Wait! I've got it!
- No, I've got it. I'll take some ear-plugs, at least I won't hear you! - Myrddin is irritated.
- Hehe.. These two will be a good team, in spite of their struggles - NeN sais in his mind.
- I've... FOUND IT! - yells Syo - I'll take this little can!
- What the hell? You want to take a can of beer with you?! - Myrddin is astonished.
- That's right! A can of beer! DRUNKEN MODE, baby!
While Myrddin and Syo are arguing, the others pack theirselves.
- What's that? - John Beak asks Strack when he saw an amulet in his hand.
- Oh, that? That's my lucky amulet. I found it when I was training. It brings me luck since then. I can't actually explain it's specialty, I just like it.
- Well, let's hope that it will bring luck to us all... - said John Beak. He was the only one knowing what exactly awaits them in the Tower. The proffessor gave this information only to him and left John a decision - if he wants, he can say to all, if he doesn't want - he'll keep it for himself. He chose that second option, he doesn't want to stress none of the team members. He's quite stressed himself, that will do.
It's almost midnight, the members are almost packed. No one said a word for the past 40 minutes, even Syo is quiet. Now everyone is stressed, although they don't even know what's inside of the Tower. Although this is a 3-day mission, they feel like they could be there forever. Outside of the lab, Mizi Mace sits and watches the stars, Strack comes along.
- Tell me, Mizi.. - says Strack - how is it inside of the Tower?
- I don't really know. I was only at the 100th level, but from this experience I can tell that it's completely different than in our world. Almost everything feels different, escpecially the gravity, you are able to jump higher.
- Yes, but are there any obstacles that we must face?
- If there weren't any obstacles, it would be freakin' easy to get higher! On F100 my team met a ... monster... - Mizi Mace starts to talk about the past - We were a 4-member team then. The monster had no mercy for 2 of our members. Jurko Kiler and I have managed to escape. The other ones.. After that, I haven't seen them anymore..
- What?! A monster? Then you should have some weapons, right?
- No, no weapons. Our team had to escape from the falling floors before that monster did. Luckilly, Jurko and I escaped just before the floors started to fall..
- That's really scary..!
- But don't worry, Strack. Now there's 7 of us and most of the members have higher skills than my ex-team. We'll pass F100.. Now, let's get some sleep, my eyes are closing.
Mizi Mace and Strack went inside, in which there could be heard first a loud snore, than a louder yell:
- Syo, could you at least stop making any sounds when you're asleep???
When the morning comes, the teams gather, and they they will be taken to the mysterious Tower that lies in the middle of the Big Forest. They still don't know what awaits them there...

[Vinyanov]

Good! Absorbs the reader.

Though the vocabulary and the setting are not exactly of my preference... Must have read too much high fantasy...

Well, do not care. You have a talent. Keep it up.

PS. Are double f's in "proffessor" intentional?

[Laura_x]

Syo -> You've written a great story I'm waiting for the next parts

[pikol]

a to nie powinno byc w angielskim forum??
a tak przy okazjii
nie wszyscy sa specami od anglika

[John Beak]

Soy wrote it in English, and naturally, he was lazy to translate it to Polish. I do the same with English -> Czech. So mom can't read my English stories, because she just doesn't speak good enough

[syo]